IMRaD Paper
Introduction
People are admitted to the hospital everyday for a variety of reasons. Many people have one goal; to improve their health. This causes patients to make a lot of exceptions when it comes to how they are treated by the staff. When I say treated, I mean by the way the staff and patient interacted. A survey was conducted to show results of how people felt they were treated by the staff based on their reason for admission. Not much research has been done to find a correlation between reason for admission and interaction with the staff, so I was curious to see what the results would show. It is obvious that when people are admitted for very serious illness, they may be treated differently. This study focuses on people who were admitted for a short period of time.
Method
Participants
The research found was based on a survey that was sent to students at The University of Iowa. This included males and females between the ages of 18-22 to obtain a wide variety of data.
Procedure
To obtain the research required, a survey was sent out to students at The University of Iowa. They were asked five questions about their last experience at a hospital. Some of the questions include why they were at the hospital, how long they were there for, and if they felt like they were treated properly.
One suggestion is to include sources and prior research in your introductory paragraph. This will be used for the requirement of 4 sources needed for the paper. In addition it will help support your reasoning of why this is important.
ReplyDeleteSecond, Is to go into more detail and specifics about the procedure. This will help decrease the questions needing to be clarified. How are you analyzing the data? What is the procedure?
The headings were clear and the language and tone seemed appropriate. Continue to research and clarify the procedure and the importance of the knowledge gaps.